Her dark eyes are the envy of the warm, brown leaves
as they aspire to match her depth and beauty.
Her tanned skin,
harbors the memory of the summer's warmth and effervescence,
as her welcoming arms shield you,
from the bitter cold,
and inspire feelings of safety.
while her long black curls,
fall down her back
like leaves from a beautiful tree,
her voice,
as smooth as the fall wind,
offers comfort to each person who hears it
She is my mother,
and her presence,
mirrors the Fall.
Ok Tessa I see you with the utterly fantastic writing. 10/10 I love it!
ReplyDeleteAw Sophie I love you thank you so much!!!
DeleteSuch a beautiful poem and a sweet tribute to your Mom! She is lucky to have a daughter like you!
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DeleteI loved this oh my gosh you're such a good writer!!
ReplyDeleteThis was so well written! I love how you used the theme of fall in such a unique way. Great job Tessa!
ReplyDeleteThis poem was moving and so well written!
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery and details you used, the poem is amazing!
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautifully written
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ReplyDeletethis is beatiful tess
ReplyDeleteThis writing is absolutely beautiful and you and the way you used the topic of this month and incorporated your mom was very creative!
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ReplyDeleteI love this, so kind and loving. Amazing, Tessa.
ReplyDeleteGreat word choices!
ReplyDeleteThis was so sweet! Your writing is incredible Tessa!
ReplyDeleteThis is so creative!
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet! I love how you associated fall with your mom it was really creative!
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